Thursday, January 20, 2011

Chapter 7 (part 4)> Ruckus (1)

*SM High, Class 1-1...

Everyone looks at Kibum with a face. just then, he shouted EunShi's name like she just did something horrible and he's telling her to stop. but the truth is, she's just sitting at her place, doing nothing. same goes to Minho, who's also sitting at his place, right in front of her, with a book in his hand. Kibum stares at them with disbelieve. but when his eyes catch her empty table, no flower on it, and no sign of the piece of paper, he realizes, he's dreaming again. he's seeing things that didn't happen. he's day-dreaming, or people might say, hallucinating. and now, EunShi is staring at him, her eyes are right on his his. and Minho, still with his fiery gaze, are glaring at him.

Soojung: Kibum? waegurae?? (looks at EunShi)
Suzy: What's the matter, Kibummie??

Feeling embarrassed, Kibum covers his mouth and closes his eyes. he's trying to find something to cover him out. then, he thought of something and leaked it out...

Kibum: (stutters) Um, there's... there's a bug flies over u just now... i'm just trying to tell u to dodge it off...

But EunShi just stares at him blankly, emotionless...

Kibum: (blushes) U, u're scared off, uh, ani, u hate bugs right? so, i thought... u... (blush harder)

EunShi stands up and looks around. everyone's eyes are on her right now. she takes a deep breath then opens her mouth.

EunShi: I'm not scared of bugs, or hated them, Kim Kibum. i don't know where u got that idea, but still, thank u for telling me that. gomawo... (bows a little then sits back)
Kibum: Ah... (looks down) ye...

Everyone turns their head back and continue with what they're doing before. Minho gives a glance at EunShi than focuses on his book back.

Soojung: Ah, are u ok, Kibum?? u looks sick...
Suzy: Yeah... u're so red... gwenchana yo??
Kibum: Uh... (pushes their hands slowly) i'm fine... can u guys make way?
Soojung: Uh... ne... (moves away)
Suzy: (puzzled look but then moves away too)
Kibum: Thanks... (walks to his seat)
Soojung: (whispering) What's wrong with him?
Suzy: (raise shoulder) Molla... i'm worried...
Soojung: Nado...
Suzy: Hmm... did something happen between them??
Soojung: Uh... i wish i know...
Soojunhg&Suzy: (sighs) uh...

Kibum pull his chair and sits. he looks to his left, to EunShi for a moment then turns to the front back. he did that a few times until she looses her patience and turns her head towards him...

EunShi: (coldly) Do u have a problem, Kim Kibum?
Kibum: Huh??? (blushing and sweating) ah, ani...
EunShi: (stares)
Kibum: I, i... (stutters) i just... just... um... (remembers something) i have something to return to u...
EunShi: Something to return to me?
Kibum: Yes! (searches his bag) ah, here it is... (takes out) i believe this is urs... (holds it out to her)

EunShi looks at the 'thing' Kibum is holding out. she stares at it without any expressions. like she's looking at something that is not worthy looking at.

EunShi: What's this?
Kibum: Huh? Banji (*ring)... it's a ring...
EunShi: (looks away) It's not mine.
Kibum: Huh?? but, but.. but this is urs...
EunShi: No. it's not.
Kibum: This ring is urs.
EunShi: I don't have a ring.
Kibum: But, but this is... this is... it's urs... (teary eyes) it's really urs...
EunShi: (looks at him) No it's not. i don't own that thing.
Kibum: Thing?? it's a ring, EunShi. ur ring! this ring is urs!
EunShi: (stares at him coldly) I may sound rude, Kim Kibum. but please don't talk to me as if we've known each other for long. and that thing is not mine. u're mistaken.
Kibum: (stands) Mworago??? mworago hasyeossjyo???
EunShi: I said, u're mistaken. that ring is not-
Kibum: What do u mean by 'as if we've known each other for long' ??? what're u trying to say???
EunShi: Kim Kibum, please. we're merely a classmates.
Kibum: Classmate?? (takes a step in front of her) what do u mean classmate?? are u trying to say we just met?? is that what u're trying to say???
EunShi: Yes. and now please stop shouting. u're disturbing everyone else.
Kibum: Mworago??? (pulls her hand) why're u talking to me like we barely know each other??? what's wrong with u???

Again, Kibum causes a mess. all the students are looking at them. feeling things might get worse, Jaejin, the class monitor, rushes towards the 3rd year's building to look for Onew. luckily, he sees him walking along he corridor..

Jaejin: Sunbae! Jinki sunbae!! Lee Jinki sunbaenim!!
Onew: (turns) Huh? what's the matter??
Jaejin: Our class, sunbae... our class...
Onew: What's wrong with it?
Jaejin: It? uh, no, not our class! ur dongsaeng, sunbae! ur dongsaeng! Lee EunShi!
Onew: Huh? what's wrong with her??
Jaejin: U know Kibum right?
Onew: Uh, yes. waeyo??
Jaejin: I don't know. it seems like he's mad at her or something. and now he's shouting at her!
Onew: Mworago?? shouting at her??
Jaejin: Yes! he even pulled her hands and refuses to let her go!!
Onew: Mwo??
Jaejin: I think u should come to our class, sunbae.
Onew: (nods) Yes! let's go! (runs)

*SM High's Office...

Mrs. Jeong: Ah, so u're the new transfer student... u're from Beijing right?
Hyunki: Ah, ne...
Mrs. Jeong: (smiles) Nice to see u, Miss Kim.. i'll take u to ur class. Jonghyun, u can go back to ur class. thanks for looking after her and bringing her here...
Jonghyun: (nods) Ye, seonsaengnim... um, please excuse me, sunbaenim...
Hyunki: Ah, (blush) ne... Neomu kamsahamnida for helping me earlier...
Jonghyun: Don't mention it. then, see u later, seonsangnim, sunbaenim... (bows and walks away)
Hyunki: Ye...
Mrs. Jeong: He's really nice, isn't he?
Hyunki: Ah? (nods) ye, seonsaengnim...
Mrs. Jeong: (smiles) He's a really good boy. no wonder our Student's Council's President like him so much...
Hyunki: President? u mean Lee Jinki, seonsaengnim?
Mrs. Jeong: Ah, ye. u know him?
Hyunki: Ye... i met him at the school gate just now...
Mrs. Jeong: Oh, really? (smiles) that's great. u got to meet two of the most talented boys in our school!
Hyunki: Talented?
Mrs. Jeong: Yes... they're good in everything.. almost perfect, i must say...
Hyunki: I see...
Mrs. Jeong: But there's other talented boys in 1st year too... and girls as well...
Hyunki: 1st year??
Mrs. Jeong: Yes... wae??
Hyunki: Ah, ani... it's just that my dongsaeng also a 1st year in this school... that's why i transferred here in the first place...
Mrs. Jeong: Oh? u do?? what class is he in??
Hyunki: Hmmm... i'm not sure... but i think he's in 1-1...
Ms. Jeong: Really? i teach Class 1-1... maybe i know him... what's his name?
Hyunki: Oh? it's Kim Kibum... do u know him, seonsaengnim?
Mrs. Jeong: Kim Kibum??? he's ur dongsaeng??
Hyunki: Huh? ah, ye... waeyo seonsaengnim??
Mrs. Jeong: (speechless)

*Class 1-1...

EunShi: Let me go! it hurts!
Kibum: No!! not until u stop talking to me like i'm some kind of a stranger to u!!
EunShi: (pulls her hand) Let me go! i said let me go!!
Minho: (pushes Kibum) She said let her go! are u deaf?
Kibum: Damn it! u stay out of this! stop meddling in people's bussiness!!!
Minho: U stay away from her!
Kibum: Why should i?? and who're u tell me to?? u, EunShi! come with me! (pulls her hand)
EunShi: No!! (refuses to stand)
Minho: (taps Kibum's hand) Let her go!
Kibum: I said come!! u! (glares at Minho) stay out of this if u don't want to get hurt!!
Minho: Huh. u think i'm scared? let her go, u heard her right??
EunShi: Let me go!!!
Kibum: No!!! i won't!! u, move!!
Minho: No!!
Kibum: I said move!!

Suddenly...

Onew: What's with the ruckus???
EunShi: Oppa!!
Minho: Hyung!!
Kibum&other students: Sunbae!!

11 comments:

kak peah XD said...

ehh ? Kibum nie da gile ke hape ? asyik b'khayal je . haha~
yeke Eun xtakot bugs ? asal aq mcm nak tergelak ? hahaha~
whoaaa ! Jaejin da smpai , berhemah lak aii , hahaha~
wahh ! Eunshi telah direbut oleh kedua dua pihak , tibe2 Ahn dtang tarik tengah2 . tengah2 ??? omo ! sorry . hahaha~
weyh , ruckus tu mende ? haha~
mcm good2 je Onew , konon2 bole stop kan laa ? blehh ! da laa gatal , haha~

MinEun said...

ha3 . . ntah la . . agaknye la kot . . ke3 . . :PP
btol la . . mne ade aq takot dgn mereka ~
kui3 . . aq taw ko rindu jinwoon sebena nye un ? ? huk3 . .
omo ! what's in the center bby ? ? O.O
ruckus tuh kekecohan or keributan . . amek ko , aq gne bhase melayu btol taw ! :PP
keh3 . . bias sape la c onew tuh yek ? ? :]]

kak peah XD said...

HAHAHA~ blah laa , semut datang pon menjerit2 . haha~
uhmm , cmner kaw taw aq rindu beliau ? hahaha~ neaga jal jal jal mothaeseo , haha~
center ? molla yo~ LMAO !
OWH , baru beta mengetahuinya , haha~
tu laa pasal , huhu~

MinEun said...

gah ? ? mne ade ! ! >.<
ke3 . . aq taw . . ko ta dtg 2 ary sbb ko ta nmpk nme dye dlm blog neyh un ? btol ta ? :DD
omo . . tlg jgn kotor un comment box neyh dear . . :PP
ke3 . . ape la tuanku neyh , lembab boleyh tahan ~

kak peah XD said...

HAHAHA~ jgn laa mention akt sini aq xdtg 2 hari , kang cramp balik lak kaki aq , hahahahaha~
wekk wekk , nak kotorkan jugak , haha~
tuanku xblaja kat Oxford laa . hahaha~

MinEun said...

gwehh ! ! na mention jugak ! !
biela ponteng ! ! sbb dye kne **** ***** dye ! ! warghhh ! !
cramp ? omg , jgn la wat aq saket perot balek ~
tuanku plak . . ko neyh mmg ske ubah2 ayt la . . @______@

b0o said...

ahn ..noty2 ..!
xdtg skola ek??
hmm .hyunki ..
seorg kakak yg yg x prihatin langsung .hehe nuh adek mu duk gadoh ngn mantan cewekknya ..hehe
minhoo cepat tnjukk kejantanan anda !
haa suda ang ayam cik peanut da dtg .. aayokk .

MinEun said...

ha3 . . taw tape . .
sian Kibum . . noona dy jaat ! :PP
ke3 . . Minho tuh pemalu eonni ~ (muntah)
ayam . .

b0o said...

noona dea mmg jaat sket ,tp still care kat adek dea ..hehe

Azza said...

Unnie, I made a fan-fic, will you read the first part and tell me what you think?

MinEun said...

ah , i've read it . .
i think it's pretty good , ah no , it's great ! the only thing is i didn't understand certain parts like why both Key and Jonghyun are fighting over Mindy n stuff . . i think if there's more character introduction , it'll be awesome ! :)